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    dots Submission Name: Worrydots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
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    Words: 46
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    dotsWorrydots
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    Flashes in my eyes,
    Goosebumps rise,
    Zips through my mind,
    Trickles down my spine,
    Tenses up my fists,
    Twists through my wrists,
    Pumps up the brain,
    Make muscles strain,
    Fire the muffled screams,
    Ignites scary dreams,
    Worry. Worry. Worry.
    Worry. Worry. WORRY.
    Make it stop.




    Submitted on 2012-12-20 22:00:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Somehow you have to relate, the only way I could rid you of worry would be to apply some form of analgesic so to speak. There's really no way to defeat the nature of reality. Consider plausibility's cause to imagination's immaturity, and that's just the imaginary half of it, deftly supported by the fact that there's a lot of bad things that have, could, or will happen. Granted there are a lot of people who go through life without experiencing much of this but only a numby or perhaps a dummy can completely disregard the healthy nature of worry.

    Then again if you made clear what your worried about perhaps I could come up with a mitigating prosthesis or a psychological prognosis after all it's Christmas. We could all do with a little bit of philanthropically phenological extricating explication. Maybe even some execrating eventuation evocative. Seriously, I'd be sure and put an amalgamated anathema android in your stocking to be your terminus thrall, ahh but there I go letting my imagination get the better of me! What can I tell you I'm worried!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-12-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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