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    dots Submission Name: GOD RAP :) dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGOD RAP :) dots
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    I have been placed in the middle of a mistake,
    but by His Grace, He says I am saved
    I look around all the sad cries on my neighbors eyes that seem like they come from inside of me
    takes a hard heart to get past what I believe
    Because The Spirit is strong and I know one day there is a home for me
    take a mirror off my wall and replace it with the life inside of me
    I can testify till im blue and sing till im out of breath
    this isnt death
    this is truth
    holy water raining down and dripping from my roof
    its the truth
    this mess that lives inside of me
    seize the day
    pray
    dont waste away
    I need more
    Hungry for meat and bread I never tasted before
    And its a war
    its a battle
    but he won that day at cavalry
    take a memo from my testimony
    this is what I believe

    THere is a Father
    and a son and a spirit inside of me
    He is the Author
    and A King and a power to find relief

    Because in this kingdom you and I we can operate
    sign our fate
    and the fate of all those we love
    there is a way to mercy and power
    and it come from
    above




    Submitted on 2012-12-22 09:15:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amen. Sometimes it can be so easy to forget that, caught up in the cares of this world.
    | Posted on 2012-12-24 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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