I love that this is a love poem that doesn't use the word 'love' yet still shows the love you will give. I also love how you proclaim 'I will' instead of hoping, wishing, wanting, or dreaming. It's a promise without actually using the word 'promise'. I dig it
This is very gentle. Makes me think of something an expectant parent would write, the promise of lullabies, whispering gold into dreams, waking with words and listening with attention, caressing brow, kissing eyelids, all chaste activities a parent would indulge in. The picture of course does not quite fit that scenario I guess. But it all sounds very nice.