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    dots Submission Name: Beyond Rockdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBeyond Rockdots
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                             The mountain is as high as the sky
                             And I am looking down from the
                             Highest cliff of all
                             Into forever
                             Above
                             One lone spire is still higher than I

                             She is there
                             With wind whipping her hair
                             She pierces my heart
                             Like a rising sun sending vapors of red
                             Flame pulsing ever and always up, up, up
                             I stand facing the fire of her
                             I can see she is exposed and alone
                             But so proud and noble she blossoms here
                             In the rarefied air
                             Where only eagles and I
                             dare
                             fly




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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the way you write this, altho I don't know who she is. But it's pretty and filled with longing, and I really like it.
    | Posted on 2013-01-01 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent mirador bartizan panoramas. Proud and noble....how I love her!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-12-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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