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    dots Submission Name: my name is amberdots
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    Author: Rhaine
    ASL Info:    25/Yes/An Alley
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 660/744/196
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 689
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I haven't written anything in years on here. This is just basically trying to calm myself down. I figured if I tried writing it out id feel better. I don't. I fuck everything up. I have such a bad attitude lately. God bless me please.


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    dotsmy name is amberdots
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    My heart feels hard
    My chest beats heavily
    I can't be at peace
    I hear the words
    Coming out of my mouth

    I'm alone with myself
    Crying and smoking
    I fight with myself
    Weeping and wiping
    These fucking tears away

    Why do I say these things?
    Why do I act this way?

    God help me.




    Submitted on 2012-12-29 20:39:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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