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    dots Submission Name: A Vengeance Never Stoweddots
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    Author: Tm
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       It's about a two faced guy


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    dotsA Vengeance Never Stoweddots
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    My great friend Alex introduced me to this guy
    When I looked over at him he said hi
    At first I thought that he was quite strange
    But after a month, my feelings began to change
    This particular guy, I won't say his name
    But I soon learned he played some sort of game
    After that month, my heart started to race
    Every time I saw his face
    Then one day he took my hand out of sight
    I thought my ex had seen, was he trying to start a fight?
    Then one day something
    emerged
    When I told one of my friends something, because I was urged
    I thought I could trust her but I was wrong
    She told this guy what was true all along
    I denied it and vowed to hate her forever
    But forever's a long time, aren't I so clever
    Then she told me you got a girlfriend
    I was crushed, hoping it would come to an end
    I wanted to feel happy, but I just couldn't be
    Because all I wanted was you to be with me
    The worst is I started believing what she said to be true
    Because I couldn't stop thinking of this guy...it was you
    I know this explains nothing why I'm mad
    But I'm getting that point be patient and glad
    Last night at a party, I sat down and looked at a phone
    This person that I am speaking of will be unknown
    And in the messages from you
    It said things like "I love you" and "you're beautiful" too
    We all read those texts, us which were four
    And that's when we decided you were a man whore
    I don't mean disrespect I don't want our friendship to go
    But we can't get what we want all the time sometimes we have to stop and time will slow
    I really wish that you try and understand
    My point of saying you played with my heart just like you planned
    So that's the reason why
    I hope this isn't goodbye
    But just know I will avenge




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