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    dots Submission Name: Winter Eclipse ( Not Finished )dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsWinter Eclipse ( Not Finished )dots
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    The shutters hold tight, lovingly embracing to burden the night-
    Stoke the fire high, dancing shadows keep the mind spry-
    Lips pass a melody from old to new, stories that villains come to rue-





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      The shutters hold tight, lovingly embracing to burden the night-
    Stoke the fire high, dancing shadows keep the mind spry-
    Lips pass a melody from old to new, stories that villains come to rue-

    ...as we share a drink, a feast, and a laugh or two.

    Nothing this evening from which to refrain, so, allow me a smile, and perhaps your name-

    The flames crackle with spirit and spark, silhouetting our frames in the dark-

    Together my hand will mimic your own, no longer elusive, no longer alone-

    As here amongst friends we will share, the rarity of occasion and a loving affair.


    ////I hope you don't mind, I figured it was open to interpretation...I would still rather know how you chose to finish it? Thanks for sharing.

    -Tony
    | Posted on 2013-01-02 00:00:00 | by nwproud | [ Reply to This ]


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