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    dots Submission Name: why are you still awake at this hour? dots
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    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswhy are you still awake at this hour? dots
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    i stayed up to write a blog post
    about how much i miss the bed
    creaking when you climbed in

    but now you are gone to the sky
    or a farm somewhere
    or it was septicemia
    or i was confused
    and you were staying the night somewhere else

    maybe i'm not very tired today
    because i slept till noon
    just awake and awake

    i can't find the star that is you
    but i lie about it

    please don't remind me in the morning
    i am just talking in my sleep




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