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    dots Submission Name: Texas Penal Code - Section 22.011dots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTexas Penal Code - Section 22.011dots
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    My rapist doesn't know that he's a rapist.
    His entire life, he has been taught
    that when a woman says, "No",
    that it really means, "Make me".

    He doesn't understand the meaning of
    "Don't ever talk to me again"
    He thinks it's part of the thrill,
    for the love of the hunt and the chase.

    He doesn't understand that a woman
    has the ability to choose whom she has sex with,
    and can deny someone
    that she has been with before.

    He doesn't understand that when a girl is lying there,
    like a dead fish beneath him,
    it doesn't constitute sex or pleasure.
    My rapist doesn't know that he's a rapist.




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      this reads through like a twisted sliver of reality, some (including myself) can only imagine. empowering though, to make a declaration such as this, through writing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-02 00:00:00 | by nwproud | [ Reply to This ]


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