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    dots Submission Name: Snuggling is really good by Nishadots
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    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 494
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSnuggling is really good by Nishadots
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    you can snuggle with your friend

    you can snuggle with a broom

    you can snuggle with a sad song

    in an empty room



    you can snuggle with a cat

    you can snuggle with a tree

    you can snuggle with a blanket

    or a college degree

    or a bee, but that's not advisable



    you can cuddle with a cake

    and get some icing on your chest

    it's really very helpful

    when you're feeling quite depressed



    even hedgehogs hug their moms

    when they can't take it anymore

    a velcro hug can make your day

    you should even hug a whore

    instead of that other thing

    (unless everyone's in the mood for it)

    coz no always means no

    just saying



    you should snuggle with your best friend

    and make a sweet prank call

    you should rub a puppy's belly

    yell nonsense words at a doll



    i have also been told that

    embracing a philosophy

    is popular



    there are many things (such as bookmarks)

    that good do with a good stroke

    i think your phone can benefit

    from you telling it a joke



    if you are sleepy after that thing

    you really shouldn't do

    (coz god will be angry)

    the least that you can do is

    give their ears a little coo

    then be honest about it

    before the whole stalker suicide thing happens



    it's really ok to not rhyme parantheses

    it's only bad when you don't toy with their hair before you do it



    things that go out of fashion also deserve to be

    photographed at the very leastfor the sake of posterity

    i think they prefer it if you lick their earlobes

    in a friendly fashion



    i always let my fingers caress

    the doorknobs and the keys

    i think that once a toilet paper

    said i should say please

    also

    tell your lighters and scrunchies you are sorry you lost them

    they get so attached to you



    the next time you are cooking

    give your eggbeater a fondle

    and always encourage your liver and lungs

    "it's nothing you can't handle!"



    you should give a nickname to a bird

    i think dinglebat is good

    i heartily recommend a

    good friendship with your food

    especially that bittergourd,

    it's so so misunderstood

    massage your meat

    give your pesto a treat

    give those peas

    a squeeze

    rhyme

    unnecessarily-s!



    are you feeling better now?




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