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    dots Submission Name: Our Graciousnessdots
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    Author: nwproud
    ASL Info:    27 / vancouver, wa
    Elite Ratio:    5.62 - 280/243/64
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOur Graciousnessdots
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    A pardon is assumed
    for having surmounted
    the apposition
    between accolade
    and incentive,
    the divergence of
    temptation,
    and metaphor.

    Alas, neither authority
    nor experience
    creates such a motive
    as expressed
    in genuine sacrifice,
    a mark which will exist
    to satisfy some,
    but inspire many more.

    Honorable pursuits
    invigorate those
    forgotten,
    those beaten and
    left for others to find.
    How propaganda
    insinuates association
    is the manner by which
    fate will conquer
    each man alone,
    so father, captain,
    acknowledge
    the ruin of result,
    writhing with provocation
    before assuring
    the artlessness of debate
    and refutation.

    Our conquest will
    gather no praise
    so long as our
    ambition remains
    rooted in preference
    and opinion.
    Recognition is the
    means to achieve
    fulfillment in life,
    so ensure our pursuits
    remain humble,
    and telling.




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      I read this over about 5 times, fully taking it in. I must say I am quite impressed with your outlook and layout of such, many would call blasphemy. But then again not many are accustomed to the sound of honesty. Denial and oblivity seems at refuge to humanity. How obvious is their refute to these claims, as they continue to brush truth under their Persian rugs, swallow down blame with the finest wines and cover guilt with silk cloaks. Not much different from the past and certainly we shall expect worse in the coming future. Appreciation and gratitude are scarce traits, of which they seem to only come hereditary. And with more and more people harvested rather than humans born, nothing feels promising. Your write has in fact inspired me though and my faith in our race survives another day.. Thank-you
    | Posted on 2013-01-15 00:00:00 | by Darkwarrior | [ Reply to This ]


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