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Our Graciousness

Author: nwproud
ASL Info:    27 / vancouver, wa
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Words: 132
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Our Graciousness

A pardon is assumed
for having surmounted
the apposition
between accolade
and incentive,
the divergence of
and metaphor.

Alas, neither authority
nor experience
creates such a motive
as expressed
in genuine sacrifice,
a mark which will exist
to satisfy some,
but inspire many more.

Honorable pursuits
invigorate those
those beaten and
left for others to find.
How propaganda
insinuates association
is the manner by which
fate will conquer
each man alone,
so father, captain,
the ruin of result,
writhing with provocation
before assuring
the artlessness of debate
and refutation.

Our conquest will
gather no praise
so long as our
ambition remains
rooted in preference
and opinion.
Recognition is the
means to achieve
fulfillment in life,
so ensure our pursuits
remain humble,
and telling.

Submitted on 2013-01-02 17:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I read this over about 5 times, fully taking it in. I must say I am quite impressed with your outlook and layout of such, many would call blasphemy. But then again not many are accustomed to the sound of honesty. Denial and oblivity seems at refuge to humanity. How obvious is their refute to these claims, as they continue to brush truth under their Persian rugs, swallow down blame with the finest wines and cover guilt with silk cloaks. Not much different from the past and certainly we shall expect worse in the coming future. Appreciation and gratitude are scarce traits, of which they seem to only come hereditary. And with more and more people harvested rather than humans born, nothing feels promising. Your write has in fact inspired me though and my faith in our race survives another day.. Thank-you
| Posted on 2013-01-15 00:00:00 | by Darkwarrior | [ Reply to This ]

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