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    dots Submission Name: My Journeydots
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    Author: jjd
    ASL Info:    20/male/Griffin, Ga.
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 20/78/34
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsMy Journeydots
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    From sea to sea,
    From land to land, I can find my way
    Through the sand,
    I can navigate all around.
    My mission is to
    deliver the messages
    to and from the king.
    The sea is my life,
    A boat is my ride.
    I am strong on the outside,
    But weak in the mind.
    I have a heart
    of gold, but I take nothing
    from no one, not even my king!




    Submitted on 2013-01-03 22:46:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh to be by the sea and in it again! Now I presently live inland and it takes a day trip to go to the shore. This is a tidy little poem with lots of excitement that awaits. Thanks you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-18 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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