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    dots Submission Name: Winning The Invincible Minddots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 262/107/52
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Our Mind makes us do good and bad deeds. It is imperative to try to conquer our mind.


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    Winning The Invincible Mind
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    Mind the master.
    Mind the monster.
    Mind the avaricious.
    Mind the arbitrator.
    Mind the ruler.
    Mind the runner.

    Mind the soil
    where the seeds of good and bad thoughts are sown
    and they reap into good and bad actions.
    Control on mind.
    Control on actions.
    Control on life.
    Mind governs your life.

    Eyes do not see what mind does not know.
    Mind can do wonders.
    Beautiful mind beautiful life.
    Mind takes directions and add dimensions to your life.

    Virtues grow and are nurtured in the mind.
    Vices, the enemies are annihilated in the mind
    by true knowledge and right guidance
    to have an enlightened mind
    to transform life
    to lead an uplifted and serene life.







    Submitted on 2013-01-04 13:54:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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