You (God) and Me

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You (God) and Me

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You (God) and Me ------------------------------------------- My mind, body and soul is Your's. You are absorbed in me and I am absorbed in You. Such is the love between me and You.

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So short and very sweet.

| Posted on 2013-05-22 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

absorbed and dissolved and consumed by my God. Oh yes!

| Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]

it should end in you "Such is the love between me and You." not "me and you"

| Posted on 2013-01-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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