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    dots Submission Name: You (God) and Medots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 269/107/54
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
        In this poem I have described an ideal relationship between God and a human being.


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    dotsYou (God) and Medots
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    You (God) and Me
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    My mind, body and soul is Your's.
    You are absorbed in me
    and I am absorbed in You.
    Such is the love between me and You.





    Submitted on 2013-01-04 13:56:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So short and very sweet.
    | Posted on 2013-05-22 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      absorbed and dissolved and consumed by my God. Oh yes!
    | Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      it should end in you

    "Such is the love between me and You."

    not "me and you"
    | Posted on 2013-01-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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