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    dots Submission Name: The Other Half Of Medots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Other Half Of Medots
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    Thereís something missing in my life
    And I know what it must be
    The one thing that will make me whole
    And set my blind heart free
    Itís a lady I have yet to find
    Over land or over sea
    And when I do, she will become
    The other half of me

    Who is this lady of my life
    That I have yet to see
    Must I wait or must I go
    And search relentlessly
    Could she appear from out the blue
    Like a leaf, born on a tree
    Forever growing in my heart
    As the other half of me

    If I find this lady fair
    Iíll love her endlessly
    As I will know that I have found
    A leaf, on loves great tree
    Time will tell and demonstrate
    That what will be will be
    But Iíll keep searching all my life
    For the other half of me





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    ||| Comments |||
      The tone of these words is quite positive and gently uplifting....youre incredibly hopeful.
    Which makes the 'If' in the last stanza surprising, and a bit incongruent.
    A lovely read in all. Im happy you shared it here.

    You do know I must pick nits....
    And you should remember how highly I think of your romantic posts. Youre Sir Paul in disguise; Im still fairly certain of that. ;)
    | Posted on 2013-02-13 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the flow of this and can relate only too well to its content. Thanks for sharing
    | Posted on 2013-01-07 00:00:00 | by Rebecca7943 | [ Reply to This ]
      Surely, she must be out there somewhere, or even near. But what adventure would bring together your paths though yet unseen may be the crowning experience of both your lives. Quite exciting a prospect to move toward! Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-07 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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