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    dots Submission Name: Unrestdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 136/243/154
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsUnrestdots
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    Same old same old unrest unholy, run rampant
    In my gut.
    Is there salvation, for the likes of me, unfettered
    and without a footing?
    Have I looked back enough upon this
    Barren wasteland, plead enough, cried enough --
    what is this fatal flaw that
    keeps on giving --




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