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Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 139 /260 /173
Words: 51
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Same old same old unrest unholy, run rampant
In my gut.
Is there salvation, for the likes of me, unfettered
and without a footing?
Have I looked back enough upon this
Barren wasteland, plead enough, cried enough --
what is this fatal flaw that
keeps on giving --

Submitted on 2013-01-05 10:40:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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