Unrest

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 139 /256 /171 Words: 51

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Unrest

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Same old same old unrest unholy, run rampant In my gut. Is there salvation, for the likes of me, unfettered and without a footing? Have I looked back enough upon this Barren wasteland, plead enough, cried enough -- what is this fatal flaw that keeps on giving --

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