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    dots Submission Name: The Stationdots
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    Author: nwproud
    ASL Info:    27 / vancouver, wa
    Elite Ratio:    5.62 - 280/243/64
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Stationdots
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    What words are there,
    to figure or forgive
    the escape we made,
    there was no choice
    but a single lanterns glow,
    implying our shelter
    would soon be overrun.

    I would rather us to have
    traveled together,
    than arranged to meet
    in six months time.
    If my hand was too steady
    or my words too sure,
    I accept the blame.

    Move, then, I did,
    with such haste
    you would be sure to see.
    My only concern
    was rooted in the idea
    of capture, of being withheld.

    Perhaps my faith
    was not pure, not true,
    the love was not sure enough.
    For if I had looked back,
    I would have seen
    you, hand-in-hand
    with your abductors.

    Instead I ran,
    focused only on
    the train depot
    where we had agreed to meet.
    I believed that there,
    at the station,
    we could start life again.

    The depot channels
    romantic spells of love,
    exhausted with spans of time
    and hand-written letters.
    Tomorrow we are to expect
    each others arrival.
    I will not sleep tonight.




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      oh I like this so much! the sincerity, the simplicity,the regret, the hopefulness but not quite, the anticipation... and I love the lines:

    'implying our shelter
    would soon be overrun.'

    very nicely done..!
    | Posted on 2013-01-20 00:00:00 | by expiring_touch | [ Reply to This ]


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