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    dots Submission Name: A Life's Wishdots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 337/332/96
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Something I try and remind myself of everyday.


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    dotsA Life's Wishdots
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    I'm alive and happy

    this today, I breathe its hopes for tomorrow.

    As I dance in these moments
    I allow the past to float in like a familiar scent.
    Bringing me goose bumps,
    like a walk in the sun when your skin is still cool.

    Lets us live in the now moments
    making something new each day we are blessed to have.
    Every moment we can be with the ones we love
    suffocate yourself in it,
    in family,
    in the happiness, even if at first we don't see it
    every day brings this.
    These are our gifts,
    use them fully.

    Wipe the sleep from your eyes,
    allow the haze to clear
    and fill your mind with wonderful thoughts of you.
    Because when you are knocked down
    it is your own hand that will help you up.
    Dont be afraid to be alone
    it is not a lonely time,
    it is a time of reflection
    of happiness
    and humor.
    If you are not your best friend
    you cannot expect anyone else to want the job either.

    Happiness and love can build what is broken
    and you alone have all the power in the world.
    Life is fantastic
    lets dace in all the spaces in between.




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