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I've Been There


Author: Cordell
ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592 /807 /392
Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I've Been There


I've Been There

I've been there
I've been down that road
That endless road

Did anyone care
Not a single soul
No one to share
Left out in the cold

Lived in fear
Jumped out of my skin
I've been there
And came out with a grin...

S.H.




Submitted on 2013-01-13 12:31:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You must have hit a funny bone.
| Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
   i love the ending !
| Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]
  I dunno, this poem is kinda too short and too closed to have a powerfull impact on the reader. Almost too personal I would say, for the reader to fully comprehend it. You need to be more descriptive if you're gonna name a poem that. Here, the same subject done right: http://youtu.be/L-bUSCM1WPE
| Posted on 2013-01-13 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  Well it has a happy ending even though the details are left to the imagination. :)
| Posted on 2013-01-13 00:00:00 | by timepet | [ Reply to This ]


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