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hand busy mind steady

Author: OlMrTerrible
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hand busy mind steady

When i was younger i made medicine of writing, but now i am older and sick of trying, to write one legitimate rhyming line that doesn't end with an "e" or "I". I strive to find that perfect timing, but I know no grammar and can't figure out poetic alignment.

So i pretend to write endless epics so blatantly desperate to not seem fake, but make instead run-on sentences and lackluster statements. Wanting so badly, for anyone to say they hate it, so i can feel the shame of faking greatness. It never was the words but the writing that saved me.

Submitted on 2013-01-14 13:22:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I don't what to say
people will love it or hate it
not every one gets it right
write or other wise
you and i can just keep on trying
| Posted on 2013-01-15 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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