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    dots Submission Name: hand busy mind steadydots
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    Author: OlMrTerrible
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 1/2/3
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshand busy mind steadydots
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    When i was younger i made medicine of writing, but now i am older and sick of trying, to write one legitimate rhyming line that doesn't end with an "e" or "I". I strive to find that perfect timing, but I know no grammar and can't figure out poetic alignment.

    So i pretend to write endless epics so blatantly desperate to not seem fake, but make instead run-on sentences and lackluster statements. Wanting so badly, for anyone to say they hate it, so i can feel the shame of faking greatness. It never was the words but the writing that saved me.




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      I don't what to say
    people will love it or hate it
    not every one gets it right
    write or other wise
    you and i can just keep on trying
    | Posted on 2013-01-15 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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