hand busy mind steady

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hand busy mind steady

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When i was younger i made medicine of writing, but now i am older and sick of trying, to write one legitimate rhyming line that doesn't end with an "e" or "I". I strive to find that perfect timing, but I know no grammar and can't figure out poetic alignment. So i pretend to write endless epics so blatantly desperate to not seem fake, but make instead run-on sentences and lackluster statements. Wanting so badly, for anyone to say they hate it, so i can feel the shame of faking greatness. It never was the words but the writing that saved me.

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I don't what to say people will love it or hate it not every one gets it right write or other wise you and i can just keep on trying

| Posted on 2013-01-15 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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