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    dots Submission Name: Deathdots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Serious
    Total Views: 559
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 91



    Description:
       Haiku about death.


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    dotsDeathdots
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    Errant memories,
    Can confuse the course of time,
    Thoughts of those long gone.




    Submitted on 2013-01-15 14:12:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's why history repeats itself.
    | Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      i love a short poem i am jealous how do you get the emotion across in just a few lines ..good job
    | Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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