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    dots Submission Name: Radiodots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 262/243/141
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsRadiodots
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    My delirium
    Feels like Poe
    Im constantly playing around
    In my head
    Tuner
    Searching the stations
    Looking for something good
    Something with meaning
    Stolen frequency
    It has to make me feel something
    Anything
    Cant ever turn it off
    O
    This ones my song
    They are all your songs
    Yes.yes they are.




    Submitted on 2013-01-17 12:24:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      For the Raven said nevermore
    they are mine!
    | Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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