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    dots Submission Name: some titledots
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    Author: isabella
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    Thomas ticked on occasion. Said:
    jesus-h-mother-fucking-christ-already
    (into the blue like he had Tourettes).
    Though he didn't suffer from the syndrome,
    there were days when the sun beat down
    too hard, too fast, and he couldn't tell
    if the stars he saw
    came from his never ending headache,
    or his almost always lack of heart.

    Mary was modern day; a barefoot whore
    who knew good feet. When she found them,
    she washed their soles with flowers and hair,
    wet her lips, and thought about:
    fucking - for free.




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      Never having had the opportunity to read the Gospel according to Thomas, I'm still curious as to whether this was inspired by it, or if it was purely creative.
    | Posted on 2014-12-15 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]
      kinda like a story I guess, maybe some details of your life, but that last bit made me laugh
    :), kinda had that twist to it, Anyways put my comment down for ya write, should of been longer was intrigued

    theinforment
    | Posted on 2013-01-23 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2013-01-18 00:00:00 | by slingerofink | [ Reply to This ]


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