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    dots Submission Name: The Last Moondots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Last Moondots

                        There is a smile that blooms
                        In blue skies
                        Skies as blue as the blue
                        my eyes

                        Right now
                        This smile is only
                        A memory
                        That plays on in some far city

                        Over the mummer of lapping seas
                        I hear the vibrato of heart
                        Strings strummed

                        I am lost
                        in an ocean of all night
                        Going on forever
                        And the last moon I will ever

                        Is sailing off Into the blue
                        of infinity

    Submitted on 2013-01-21 00:54:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lachyrmone is right. The lines

    This smile is only
    A memory
    That plays on in some far city

    is really gold. It implies and says so much. I wish I could be a smile that plays on in some far city. That would just be complete Apple Jacks awesome.
    | Posted on 2013-03-24 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Impressive. Really great write.
    | Posted on 2013-01-21 00:00:00 | by Lachrymone | [ Reply to This ]

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