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    dots Submission Name: frivolity dots

    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsfrivolity dots

    a chance happenstance
    meeting under conditions not named
    or felt, made apparent
    with aches withheld from another
    less complicated smalltown acquainted lover.
    resiliency in accepting,
    beckoning newness in its wakeŚ
    but what other time for resiliency
    if not through adversity?
    a not-so stranger naming faults
    i do not offer willingly.
    the drive home,
    my road-sight vision blurred
    with an aesthetic created by 2 am
    and fog enshrouding the wayŚ
    patience fulfilled for now

    Submitted on 2013-01-22 20:17:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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