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Author:
C. Starr
ASL Info:
35/yesplz/State of denial
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4.22 - 130/196/68
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82
Class/Type:
Poetry/Dark
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Written @ 3:13 am 1/17/13
~Untitled~
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The wind which blows through these doors will tell secrets of structure & tales of the architecture of a human soul.
Removed from shame & whole in the knowing of faulty beams...
Rusted pipes, tear stained sheets left in forgotten drawers next to misguided dreams.
These windows have pain.
And therefore broken they remain.
Jagged & dangerous to reach inside,
Even if only to turn a lock of pride.
Submitted on 2013-01-24 18:42:50
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