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    dots Submission Name: Cold Mealdots

    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsCold Mealdots

    Thou art a cold meal to eat
    Down than my fevered lust
    Bleed for me thy clotted blood
    Enough oblivion, die thee now
    To accord with my daily frenzy
    For how I never loved thee.

    Submitted on 2013-01-26 21:24:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is the from Macbeth or MacDonalds?
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