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Submission Name: Cold Meal dots

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Author:	Iram
ASL Info:	25/F/from your world
Elite Ratio:	2.66 - 50/62/55
Words:	35

Class/Type:	Poetry/Angry
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Cold Meal dots

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Thou art a cold meal to eat
Down than my fevered lust
Bleed for me thy clotted blood
Enough oblivion, die thee now
To accord with my daily frenzy
For how I never loved thee.

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Is the from Macbeth or MacDonalds?
| Posted on 2013-01-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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