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Author:	Iram
ASL Info:	25/F/from your world
Elite Ratio:	2.66 - 50/62/55
Words:	96

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	749
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Misleading languages
Wrong words
Wrong speeches
Wrong history
What have you done
With the alphabets
O human!

High definations
Of simplification
Rules over rules
For justifications
Unmarried tongues
Sucking voice
Wrong concepts
Wrong price
Wrong taste
Of blood

For what you think
You hated once
Turns out to be love
But not the love
But a sense of loss
A remained concern
A constant burn

Before the dusk
Listen to
The silence filled
Between the noise
Between your beats
Before you cry
Kill them all
Before you die
Murder the books
Speechless.

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Not very uplifting!
| Posted on 2013-01-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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