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    dots Submission Name: Wrong Wordsdots
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    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWrong Wordsdots
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    Misleading languages
    Wrong words
    Wrong speeches
    Wrong history
    What have you done
    With the alphabets
    O human!

    High definations
    Of simplification
    Rules over rules
    For justifications
    Unmarried tongues
    Sucking voice
    Wrong concepts
    Wrong price
    Wrong taste
    Of blood

    For what you think
    You hated once
    Turns out to be love
    But not the love
    But a sense of loss
    A remained concern
    A constant burn

    Before the dusk
    Listen to
    The silence filled
    Between the noise
    Between your beats
    Before you cry
    Kill them all
    Before you die
    Murder the books
    Speechless.




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      Not very uplifting!
    | Posted on 2013-01-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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