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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I could think of so many ways to eviscerate you and pull your veins through orifices, pinching small confessions from each nerve ending rooted insane and running deep.

    I want to show you so many ways to teeter on the brink of death for days, hanging on to blades carrying tendons soon to part ways.

    I am compelled to teach you as you taught me, but not this time, never again.

    I'll look away as you eat your bile, I won't even laugh as you're reduced to shuddering rust crying out for help.

    I won't even give you my enjoyment of your demise, I don't care to even think I owe you that much.




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      Christ, vindictiveness vendetta vehemence, malicious malevolence and all. This is some hideously horrible awfully terribleness, almost heinously horrendous. And they say revenge is sweet. Oxymoronic of them......don't you think?

    Bruce

    PS: Diabolically maniacal dementia and brusque macabre abrupt!!! You're so mean!!!!
    | Posted on 2013-01-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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