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    dots Submission Name: What I Longdots

    Author: spacedoutboy
    ASL Info:    22/M/Il
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 32/48/23
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       I wrote this a few years ago.. I wrote it while I was in Iraq.

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    dotsWhat I Longdots

    It's dark in here

    Alone with every little fear

    Just give me one more and I'm done

    I kiss your eyes

    And miss the life

    As I head into the dark

    The world that's keeping me from here... from you.

    All feeling's gone

    No center within to lift me up

    As I bare the world I know..

    ... and this damn song

    With every word it rips me up

    Reminds me of everything I long...

    Now down to this..

    What of this could make much sense

    So far from home

    But now it wont be long

    Till I can breathe the world I know

    Submitted on 2013-01-30 15:41:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very well written and polished. Keep posting these it's amazing.
    | Posted on 2013-02-03 00:00:00 | by ElspethRoseWolf | [ Reply to This ]

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