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    dots Submission Name: A jokedots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA jokedots
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    Autonomous, I've become resilient to your touch,
    if only for now,
    I have shelled the frontier of possibilities and burned wishes to kill expired dreams.

    I blacked out the sun where you once existed as the perfect solution,
    I breathed in the wind
    and exhaled us at separate ends
    praying all the way.

    Why did I have to rescue you from mountains so willingly only to lose you to the wilderness of your soul
    not used to being free?

    I will think about these memories no more as I smite your face into the floor of forgiveness and deny you a final kiss..

    Svw




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