Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: A jokedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 753
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 668



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA jokedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Autonomous, I've become resilient to your touch,
    if only for now,
    I have shelled the frontier of possibilities and burned wishes to kill expired dreams.

    I blacked out the sun where you once existed as the perfect solution,
    I breathed in the wind
    and exhaled us at separate ends
    praying all the way.

    Why did I have to rescue you from mountains so willingly only to lose you to the wilderness of your soul
    not used to being free?

    I will think about these memories no more as I smite your face into the floor of forgiveness and deny you a final kiss..

    Svw




    Submitted on 2013-02-01 14:43:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    196847

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    untitled written by Chelebel
    One Day written by WriteSomething
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Wavelength written by saartha
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Fasade written by jackz
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry