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    dots Submission Name: Fragmentdots

    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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       missing someone I have never met . . .

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    My heart has flown to the winds
    Warring silent cries
    Missing you
    From oceans away
    Out of sight
    But ne’er out of mind

    “I want to be with you”
    Your words echo out of the blue
    Masking not the yearning
    But sweetens the loneliness,
    Keeps the dreaming:
    Bits of happiness

    ‘til the day I see
    The hue of your eyes;
    Caress your lips;
    And hear your voice,

    Submitted on 2013-02-03 01:11:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know exactly how you feel and is it not strange
    How we are both missing someone oceans away
    That we have never met.
    | Posted on 2013-02-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      You appeal to my prurient interests while reminding me of the nature of incubus, I also have dreams of such succubi. I really like the line "But sweetens the loneliness". Fort sort court report, tort port quarts, consort contort retort cohort cavort snort. If your not carful you wind up with shades of Pygmalion with no substance other than their personification's metaphysical mystique. I mean perhaps this could have its essence aimed corporeally preternatural but the enigma entity it didn't do to me. I know you could like to meet this perfect stranger but chances are your gonna have to settle for an actual person. By me much more incredible than any incubus I could dream up. Perhaps there are those out there who can have a presence of clairaudience dynamics but i'd stick to my own kind if I were you. I mean Torqus Surreallious looks fine on paper but what that does to my terminus thrall aimed amalgamated anathema android I'd hate to wind up toy say. No actually I hope you find this voice, attached to a mesmeric dude who tickles your fancy. I'm just toying with you!!!

    | Posted on 2013-02-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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