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    dots Submission Name: Where?dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Venting
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    dotsWhere?dots
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    Here we are...
    Once upon a time waiting and lingering within this hell
    devised by others whom have caused this reality for us
    Granted we did have some under taking for this life we now live
    ...
    Yet here we are...
    Things have changed and for once ...
    Just maybe luck is on our side- or so I thought

    I am coming to the realization I am loosing you..
    Or at the very least loosing the faith you once held onto
    The belief that karma is real
    The belief that good things happen to good people

    No longer looking at the brighter side of things
    No longer the voice of reason - or a glass half full type of person.

    Your outlook on life has changed...
    Mine has too...

    Where do we go from here?




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      sounds like alot of change from back then, how life used to be is no longer the same now, I like how you admit someone can change your life but you took part as well, noone to blame, anyways good write poetic, keep up the good work an God bless

    theinforment
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