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Submission Name: oscillate. dots

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Author:	lolaxelmo
ASL Info:	23/F/IA
Elite Ratio:	2.96 - 34/37/38
Words:	30

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	905
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	286

Description:
"le vrai chemin" is french and means "the right path." i speak english and french. sometimes the french just feels more correct for what i'm going for.

oscillate. dots

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oscillations in realizations
le vrai chemin momentarily
but after the moment passes?
impermanence faced again
always a shock after
full acceptance, becoming comfortable
with familiar, unspoken
recognition demanded,
forced apparent

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