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    dots Submission Name: my 2 centsdots
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    Author: dismentled
    ASL Info:    26/M/"South of Heaven"
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 625/583/217
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1032
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    dotsmy 2 centsdots
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    too young to b cynical
    too old to care,
    lifes a bitch
    and lifes not fair
    so quit the whining
    and get used to cold
    believe what you want,
    whether thought or told
    you can be walked over
    and suffer the fool
    or be the walker
    and another f'in tool
    look up to god
    if thats what you want
    and buy what you need
    or get what you got;
    a big surprise
    a lesson not learned
    couldn't rise up
    so now you'll burn
    only had this life
    to fix this catastrophe
    now you'll never know
    what you truelly can be

    could you utilize your love
    and rise above hate
    make your own destiny
    and damn your fate
    look through the stars
    and find some peace
    embrace the universe
    and be set free
    from your worldly problems
    that cloud the mind
    keapt from looking fwd
    trapped in whats left behind
    claim you don't know
    say you don't care
    cause you feel betrayed
    by a god not here
    so bite your tounge
    cause i wont hear
    how you surcame
    because of your fears
    I showed you once
    wont say so twice
    believe what you will
    ane ignore this advice




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