I've gotta agree with Blue Monk there, but I'm definitely gonna sugar-coat the pastry a bit more.
I loved, loved, LOVED the rhythm of this - almost dream-like, sorta like a fantasy. I could almost feel the chill and cool rush of attraction, probably just because of how it's written.
But, yeah, some details here and there could throw the reader off...though, perhaps it's selective.
Very classy sounding, and like I commented on Dale's pieces, I like poetry about women and goddesses in particular. The use of "frozen" twice in the first stanza threw me off a little, but this has a nice roll to it. I also like happy endings.