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    dots Submission Name: I Still Feel Youdots
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    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       I was at a poetry slam for a friend, watching her recite hers. I was inspired for a few seconds, and I was so morbidly depressed. Over a guy who only wanted one thing and I let myself fall for it. SO here I was sitting in a corner (Literally) and typing away on my iPod.


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    dotsI Still Feel Youdots
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    I taste you,
    Like a hammer through my teeth.
    I smell you,
    Like a flower to my nose.
    I see you,
    Forever in my dreams.
    I feel you,
    Like you are beside me.

    It's been years now,
    And I still feel you.
    Like you're in-between.
    I still hear you,
    Like you're right in my ear;
    Whispering sweet nothingness.

    I want this,
    Now and forever.
    I need this,
    My guilty pleasure.

    And now you're alone,
    Just like I.
    But I'm still not happy,
    Because you're not near.

    I can't taste you anymore,
    Because my taste buds reject you.
    I can't smell you anymore,
    Because I've grown immune.
    I can't hear you anymore,
    because my ears block out the sound.
    I can't see you,
    Because everything's dark.
    I can't feel you,
    Because you're so far away.




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      Sounds like your heart is crying out for this person, because the love you have or feelings are still with you, emotions are a tuff thing to go through, but things like this in life I believe make us who we are as people as a person, I enjoyed the write it kinda touched base with alot of things I have felt or am still feeling so I can relate with you, its always nice to get a woman perspective on things like this, because I share alot of my feelings like this and it seems like Im the only one, so Im glad you shared these thoughts, God bless my friend

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    | Posted on 2013-02-15 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]

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