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    dots Submission Name: Save Medots
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    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       I was reading a book called Taken by Storm, and the part I read made me feel so broken, and it brought up memories. So I wrote this to give myself some perspective into my own life, and the way I'm living now.


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    I feel so devastatingly sad.
    With no clue in my head as to why.
    The dark makes my dreams bad.
    I will forget you or I will try,
    My hardest to drown you out.
    With cuts, lyrics and books.

    But every night I fill myself with doubt.
    Remembering those looks.
    The anime like qualities,
    Whether you were sober or stoned.
    You were a tease,
    And all I ever known.

    Now I'm going under the dark.
    It's suffocating yet so peaceful.
    Away from you and your spark,
    And then I won't be so doubtful.

    And now I talk to my bedroom walls,
    Hoping their answer will be a lie.
    And I'm walking through these halls,
    Waiting for an ally.




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