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    dots Submission Name: From me to youdots

    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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       Obviously, I wrote this to my mum. She still hasn't seen it and I don't know if I want her to. I cried while I wrote this a while back, and I cry when I read it. But, uh thanks.

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    dotsFrom me to youdots

    How do you expect me to talk to you when all you do is scream?
    How do you expect me to trust you when I know what went down?
    You're supposed to be there but you're not it seems.
    I'm not the best kid in the world but in my own faults, I drown.

    I know you think I'm pathetic for all my mistakes.
    I know you want me gone as fast as I came.
    Yet we still share the true smiles and the fakes.
    I love you mom, and I know you feel the same.

    But you seem to be more stressed day by day.
    I don't know what it's from, and you don't ever talk about it.
    This family, I see it with my own eyes, its increasing decay.
    But you don't know whats bothering me not even a lil bit.

    I keep my secrets and you keep yours.
    I want to help you, but you don't speak.
    Our family has gone through many wars.
    Since I can't say this to you're face then call me weak.

    I've failed you many times and will a lot more.
    I just need you to be here, for your little girl.
    When I'm bruised and scared, tired and sore.
    Even when the lies continue to swirl.

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