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    dots Submission Name: A Few Last Wordsdots
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    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       This short, simple thing is toward my ex. After I broke up with him my insomnia fuckin' like took over. Only because every time I closed my eyes I saw him and his new gf. My body and mind was making me regret my decision, but I lived through it (obviously) and now we're friends and he's always there.


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    dotsA Few Last Wordsdots
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    I tried to leave without regret
    But my dreams still consist of your silhouette
    I'll forever miss you so
    And I hope that this you know
    I suffer from guilt of this past romance
    And if only I saw that one last glance
    I wish I could've done better
    Yet the rain just gets wetter
    But we've gone our separate ways
    Just know that today
    Will be better than the last
    Because I can't erase our past




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