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    dots Submission Name: Truthful Decisions..dots
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    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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       This was before I broke up with that guy. I was contemplating it for a couple days and I only left because I thought he didn't love me like I did. (He did, but I found that out like 3 years later) So because of fear of rejection and attachment I left. He had the nerve to say I couldn't love him. Stupid boy.


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    dotsTruthful Decisions..dots
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    You ask me to give time, for you
    But time is all we have together
    You'd like me to smile, for you
    Most of the time I can only surrender

    Yes, you do make me happy, it's true
    But how do you know what's in my head
    Your not telepathic, so you have no clue
    But your right, I don't know how you've bled

    I may not, at all, know "you"
    I'm impatient but I'll live
    I'm not sure I want to
    I want to know what you'll give

    I don't want to lose you, is what you've said
    I really don't know what I want yet
    There were a few, but many more tears to be shed
    I'm not the best for you, I bet

    Maybe she is right
    I'll end up hurting you don't you see?
    That doesn't mean I won't fight
    My head is filled with thoughts, it's become a fee

    It's too much for me to decide on my own
    Yet, you still haven't a clue
    I just don't want you thinking you know
    You won't let my feelings show, it's true
    So if I leave, I'll let you know...




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      Sounds like it was a tuff choice to make, in a way I can relate to you, from what I was reading I can say I can relate, Ive been with someone whom I didnt know if I wanted to be with them or not, of course we dont want to be lonely either, but I believe if its not meant to be then its not, I would say you would wanna be with someone who doesnt make you wait because we shouldnt, if there really or mate or soul mate or life mate, then youd know he would know and there would be no wait, thats my thought, anyways was a good read thank you for shareing, God bless my friend

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    | Posted on 2013-02-15 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]

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