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    dots Submission Name: Spring Gives Me Hopedots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
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    dotsSpring Gives Me Hopedots
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    Springs approaching,
    I smell it in the air,
    I put on my violet shorts,
    And tie up my unruly hair.
    Time to shed of those layers,
    Winter had brought on,
    My mental clouds disappear,
    In the shining sun.
    I smell honeysuckle,
    I hear laughter in the breeze,
    I feel the wind whip through my hair,
    With a certain ease.
    Winter was dry and heavy,
    A little heart breaking too.
    But spring gives me hope,
    A beautiful time to renew.




    Submitted on 2013-02-13 14:12:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I like this the thoughts of a new begining, laughter is something we all have laughter is the key to being happy for that moment in time were happy, I can relate to how you feel when spring is amonst us, the air the snow melting the river banks melt so I guess theres no more ice fishing now !!! but its a new year so we bring in new emotions new feelings, anyways thats what I had to say or comment about, take care my friend love well and God bless


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