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    dots Submission Name: Let Godots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLet Godots
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    Like a knife
    Wounding your flesh
    The feelings are too real
    All too irational
    Sometimes they can be controlled
    Other times they just unfold
    I just keep spinning on this pole
    Sooner or later I should really
    Just let go




    Submitted on 2013-02-16 09:48:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can't quite come to decide what the battle is. Maybe a difference of gender understanding? The piece makes me want to know though.

    Edmonton here as well! Do you know any good poetry stuff in the city?
    | Posted on 2013-02-16 00:00:00 | by Anarius | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, this battle, good subject. I like that you keep it simple here, can really get a lot of perspective on the lack of elaboration,
    it is kind of what it is here.

    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-02-16 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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