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    dots Submission Name: Amazing Amandadots

    Author: Midnight_Toker
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 13/232/500
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAmazing Amandadots

    I thought I knew what beautiful was,
    until the first time I lost myself in your eyes,
    I was sure I understood the meaning of love,
    then you came along and everything was redefined,
    it seems like before you..
    the stars never shined,
    but now they've come to life in luminous clusters,
    I went from a vapid colorless void,
    to a world of speechless beauty and brilliant lustre,
    everyday's a gift for me to discover,
    i'm unafraid because you're by my side,
    I know I will adore you 'till my heart beats no more, but even in death my love will never die,
    you're what makes me alive...
    my beautiful amazing Amanda

    Submitted on 2013-02-16 14:27:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw, This was the most cutest Poem I ever read. Keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2013-03-06 00:00:00 | by angelagresham | [ Reply to This ]

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