A distant location,
contains the cat nip of my affection
To which is in the grasps of my question
It appeals yet repeals
In one swift action
Making me want to run
In another direction.
Yet, I still cannot succeed
Nor go into succession
Perhaps this is because
It lets me be.
Warranting me to able to
teach it a fun quick lesson.
This is the response and reaction
I'm curious to see what will happen
As this is my way of stopping the attraction
Even if it's for one brief second
Atlas, i'll be able to contain all thought filled transgressions.
I've read this a few times over now and find myself intrigued for sure. The flow of it definitely has likeness to spoken word speeches. I think the vagueness of the piece as to what you are talking about both makes one wonder what this place, this object of your affection is and we desire to know, but it also leaves the reader wanting something firm to grasp.