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    dots Submission Name: Everything I Wantdots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 882
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    Description:
       Just got hit by the desire to create something beautiful for the man that I love.


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    dotsEverything I Wantdots
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    Somehow, out of nowhere,
    I found you in my cloud
    Of lonely, wasted sentiments
    That I refused to speak out loud.
    Somewhere, lost in time,
    You were unknowingly searching for me.
    And I was caught up in my own desires,
    Playing a role I could never be.
    Sometimes I would pause in my reveries,
    And wonder what I was waiting for.
    But I never realized you would be the one
    To give me something to wake up for

    I looked into your eyes and saw
    Something there, looking back at me.
    I held your hand and kissed your lips,
    And your love set me free
    From a life that I had begun to hate
    And memories that never failed to haunt
    My fragile heart and my tortured soul
    And you are everything I want.

    Somehow, I managed to make you mine
    And to remember what it is like to feel
    Something inside myself that was pure
    Something that could only be real.
    Somewhere inside me, youll always remain,
    A constant reminder that Im worthy of your kiss.
    And I thought that I had loved before,
    But nothing ever prepared me for this.
    Sometimes I wonder if this can last,
    If happiness will one day expire.
    Until that moment I will love with all I have,
    And let your hands stoke my fire

    I look into your eyes and I see
    Nothing I have ever known.
    You took me in your arms, made me complete
    And my whole world has grown
    Into something I never knew I would have,
    Surrounded by a love I must flaunt.
    Youre the one that I was searching for,
    And you are everything I want.




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    ||| Comments |||
      This seems very endearing. Real feelings being perfectly flowed from thought to art. I love when i have true inspiration rather than forcing out half the things i feel i need to express.
    | Posted on 2016-05-07 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow!! Im can already see that i'll be reding alot of your posts! This made me cry... Thinking of my husband, thinking of our love and how i was so broken before him and now... I couldnt spend a day without him.... Ahhh i could go on forever. But this is about your post and i just find it soo very amazing! From the heart, truthful, enlightening.. KEEP POSTING

    Jackz :)
    | Posted on 2013-03-01 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem is very beautiful and I felt you wrote it from your heart. It touched mine. Keep up the great work, I enjoyed it!
    | Posted on 2013-02-23 00:00:00 | by darkwhtangel | [ Reply to This ]


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