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    dots Submission Name: Inevitabilitydots
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    Author: S.A.M.
    ASL Info:    26/f/xx
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 476/419/137
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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    Description:
       how I feel atm


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    dotsInevitabilitydots
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    Mixtures such as these
    Nature warns against
    A blazing torch in the night must only last till morning
    How delicate that flame -
    If it were to rain
    Poof-
    A wind to strong come passing by
    Or it slips from the fumbling hand that guides it
    Goodbye sweet protector
    So many possibilities in the wild
    But locked within
    The inferno can rage on
    Safety eternal
    But darkness does not pass this way
    Locked with the enemy
    Light will always be swallowed by darkness




    Submitted on 2013-02-21 21:02:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I have a real affinity for this on the martial arts factor. Perhaps, if we are diligent about being "locked with the enemy" we will eventually find peace!! The thought of such primal urge. Transcendentally existential......right???

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-02-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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