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    dots Submission Name: Oblique Assault dots

    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Wistful weary wildman wayward!!

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    dotsOblique Assault dots

    Treacherously torrid torrential tempestuous
    The warrior on the mountain confessed to us
    Sordid sully suborn salacious
    Only the worst will ever keep pace with us
    In extremis extremity exigence exodus
    Is the answer clear to all of us
    Intuitional intrepid impetus intrigue
    Spontaneity's tortoise trauma fatigue
    Heuristic horizon hornswoggle huckster
    Or just another cauldron muck stir
    Mystical magical manumission mandate
    That only the good would ever relate date
    Fornicating fecund finite's fate
    I can only hope it will be I rate
    Tirade treatise's transpicuous treachery
    Adjunct juxtaposition may get the best of me
    Estranged ensemble's ethereal expletive
    Won't be contained, like water in a sieve
    Wanton wayward warrantee wrangled
    And all of that surreal newfangled
    Omnipresent omnificent omniscient omnipotence
    How I wish I could float its boat sense

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    ||| Comments |||
      You are such a genuis with your technique! Very good to read.
    | Posted on 2013-04-24 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I had a great time reading this but like and abstract painting - got little sense out of it but delighted in the formal pattern!
    | Posted on 2013-02-24 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      BTW, good title.
    | Posted on 2013-02-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      A mixing of the extraordinary with the somewhat more ordinary... I like it. It stresses the mind upwards and slides back to normal, repeatedly, kind of like I seem to do of myself... sometimes. You wrote this just for me, didn't you. ;)
    | Posted on 2013-02-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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